literature

Dreadful tears

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Dreadful tears of bitter memories
Were falling down her face
She tries to escape the sad memory embrace

Drip-drop they fall and soak the floor
The good times are gone forevermore

The wind is blowing, heartless and fast
But even the strongest wind
Cannot blow away the past
Soooo yah :3
I must say again that I do not know the strict rules to meter and poetry and things. I do this just for fun.
(actually just when I'm bored)
NOTE: I'm pretty sure that this is NOT free verse, but I think that it really is a mix of traditional forms. I DON'T KNOW. I'm SORRY. If you happen to know, please, do tell. (without being an asshole plz) And I know what free verse is. I just dunno where to put this.
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ConverseGleek's avatar
I'm rereading this over and over.
Dude, this is so beautiful. 8'D